www.xinqingdou.cc
天道宠儿[穿书]小说介绍
天道宠儿[穿书]_养个天道当宠儿[穿书]

天道宠儿[穿书]

唯心自由

小说主角: 郭一鸣 李宁坤 鸣鸣 苏景龙 仙器 苏眉 童白 师尊 金丹 散仙

相关标签: 穿书 升级 斗智斗勇 人生 拯救 智斗 拯救世界 天道 斗智 天下

最后更新:2024/3/29 4:07:24

最新章节:天道宠儿[穿书]最新章节 第38章 咱们友尽了 2024-03-29

小说简介:时掉落三章,希望大家继续支持【天道在手,天下我有!】倒霉的从升级文主角变成一鸣以为跟那些觊觎他菊花的各路人马斗智斗勇,就是他的人生大事。但很快他发现,原来他还肩负着拯救世界的重任。因为他身边跟着一个..

内容摘要:修真界很少下雨,大凡下雨,不是天灾就是*。这天整个修真界都震惊了!原本万里无云的天空,突然阴沉下来,黑云正在不断翻滚凝聚,汹涌的奔向一个方向。能惹出如此大的阵仗,绝对是有老怪要渡劫!然而修真界亿万年来,也从未听说哪个老怪渡劫能惹出如此大的声势。这人要是渡劫成功,莫不是要直接成就大罗金仙。要是失败,嘿嘿嘿,所有人都暗搓搓的想着能捡漏子就好了。渡劫老怪的遗物,那真是想想都要流口水。当然这些都是一些玩笑话,没几个人有胆子去围观渡劫期的修士渡劫。不只是渡劫期修士的暴怒他们承受不起,还因为雷劫最厌恶闹事者,不先把凑热闹的劈死,它是不会动正主的。当然正主也跑不了,依然要承受更加强大的雷劫。被劫云吸引,数道迅若奔雷的身影从四面八方向劫云聚集方向飞去,追到东海上空,距离劫雷中心十里处才止住脚步。他们都相互发现了对方的踪影,不敢再前进,以免被人偷袭暗算。作为整个修真界巅峰的存在,他们彼此即使没见过,也相互耳闻过。要不是观看别人渡劫,能给自己积累点经验,他们绝不会冒如此大的风险过来。黑云还在积聚,翻滚的云层厚重如墨,几乎能滴出水来。然而即使这样,黑云也还在积蓄力量,迟迟没有降下天罚。围观修者脸sè越发严肃,

TXT下载:电子书《天道宠儿[穿书]》.txt

MP3下载:有声小说《天道宠儿[穿书]》.mp3

开始阅读第1章 对天劫使用美男计,差评 有声小说第1章 对天劫使用美男计,差评 下载APP绿色免费APP 相似小说类似小说换源

天道宠儿[穿书]相关书单
天道宠儿[穿书]类似小说
天道宠儿[穿书]书评精选
永川F4有女主吗
作者本文女主出来了吗?
逆天
宇智波家族迟早会灭族,其实不止团藏,三代目才是最想杀光宇智波家族的,
༺༃一༒❦生ꦿ᭄゛
作者你写了五百多张,都没蹦真是个奇迹啊!
五百章都没蹦
看的真憋屈 那么多厉害的符咒 圣主能力 就被你完成这样 感觉你没有仇 别人杀你都有一笑而过 你四大皆空了吗
允儿超可爱每本火影同人,都要去收服白跟君麻吕,说实在很没意思
太没意思,俩男的有啥好写的,作者怕不是恋童癖,还喜欢男童
咸鲤看了几十章
一般题材好,写的毒我也会给个三星,告诉作者毒在哪,那些说主角弱的,其实可以理解作者,相对主角的能力,在忍界的确太强了,十二个符咒差不多十二种极致的能力,随便一个符咒都能让主角达到吊打百分之八十的人,更何况恶魔,一个圣主就等于火遁最强,以后面具呢?气魔法呢?封印恶魔的能力,好了,我为什么要给一星呢,其实很简单,我真的想不明白在火影世界里,建国有什么用,统治世界?火影这个世界说白了就适合冒险模式,你玩种田经营。忍界实力为尊,变强就好,建国,多此一举
J看的比较混乱!
从第一章就看到80多没有一章不混乱的。任务得来的奖励不清不楚。感觉写哪里就是哪里。剧情没有一个规划。火影里出现的仙侠人物说出来就出来没有提前铺垫也没有解释下。完完全全懵逼状态!!!!!!!!!
食堂泼世界这主角弱了
按这本书的设定来,主角前期就可以在围攻下杀掉一个上忍,并且没有使用写轮眼,可是在打再不斩时,三勾玉开了,圣主那“堪称尾兽”的查克拉也开了,结果躲过了几个手里剑,就大口喘着粗气,主角打架没有战术,再不斩用雾隐之术,主角跟个憨憨一样硬钢,再不斩用几个水分身就把主角耍的团团转,作者是不是火影都没看过?
星辞主角这个人刻画的太失败了
没实力还装逼 ,遇到强的敌人就苦笑 ,一点意识都没有,遇到个人就爆种 ,被简介骗过来的 ,真不知道为什么有这么多打五星的人 ,这么多拖,看看书评里面的人评价怎么样就知道他们都是托。
零零八中后期全蹦了
中后期全蹦了,能写到500多章真是奇迹,剧情全乱了,为了扭转到原剧情线上,生生把这本书写死了,这么多外挂,开局就有了堪比10尾的圣魔,不死,复活,治疗,可到了后期还写的这么弱,简直是个奇迹,太垃圾了
神奇的天使真不错
几乎每一句话都有评论呢,太多了,实在太多了!!!!
神奇的天使真是弱
主要是主角太弱了,太菜了。
少安毋躁
作者文笔不行,主角太垃圾,有符咒,有跟尾兽一样的恶魔圣主,这么多bug在,碰到谁都打半天,有不死之身都不敢拼,有能控制的尾兽圣主还动不动就累晕,呵呵。废物的见多了,就没见过这么废的。虽然我才看十几章,但也能说明毒点多到什么程度
孤独的雨
抱歉,看到47章,从书架中删除
忘不却的记忆一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一
一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一
limit写的一般
作者对人物的刻画不够好,一个人在那种世界中呆了好几年,而支撑他活下来的是女主,那男主一定会对女主产生偏执般的感情,被绑架的地方写的也不怎么地,作者这个地方写得和那些小白文龙傲天一样扮猪吃老虎,和原本想描述的形象截然不同。8.3分高了,应该7.3分差不多
第十章就送走我了,这女的都算是偷窥别人隐私了,属于犯法操作,居然因为是女的就无所谓了
千若璃
前边很有意思,后面无聊。后面就已经开始玄幻了。也是,现在这些恐怖悬疑被管的太严了。前面是真的挺有意思的,140多章往后就很无聊了。就看看前面还行。
我头像我老婆书写的还行吧
这本书怎么评价呢?不差也不好,比如同化哪章真是难受,前脚两年说猪脚很冷陌,后面就一直各种亲人我记得如果有幸福的话,猪脚一开始就应该被自己否定无序了还有污染把自己分裂,分裂出了的应该一样被污染了,无论何种情况,分裂出来的人格都会变成诡异
北已梦
看了十章直接弃书,看着看着就跳章节一样,逻辑接不上,